Tuesday, April 21, 2020

My Writing from home

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  2. Tēnā koe Ava,

    Ngā mihi nunui ki a koe, māhau e kaha ana te mahi i te kāenga.
    Many greetings to you, you have worked well on your mahi at home.

    Ngā āhuatanga e rata ana ki awau;
    1. Āu pātai i waihanga e koe, e ngana koe te whakamahi i ngā kauhau e whakamahi ana e mātau i te akomanga i te wehenga tuatahi o tēnei tau
    2. I whakamahi koe i ngā mahi pakirehua, ki tāku e kite ana, ngā mihi, i te mea, i mahi mātau i tēnei i te akomanga

    The things I enjoyed;
    1. The questions you've created, you've used what was in our lesson in class in term 1
    2. From what I can see, you've worked on the inquiry mahi, Well Done, as we also worked on this in class

    Māhau hei tiro anō,
    1. Tāpirihia te tohu pātai kei te mutunga o tāu rerenga pātai
    2. Aro ki ngā mahi kei te ripa Ako i te Kāenga kei tō mātau akomanga paetukutuku
    3. Tāpirihia tonu, āu mahi pānui me te tuhituhi mai i te ripa Ako i te Kāenga ki tāu rangitaki

    Things for you to look again at;
    1. Add question marks at the end of your questions
    2. On our class site, on the 'Ako i te Kāenga - Learning @ Home' tab, focus on the mahi on that tab
    3. Continue to add your 'Ako i te Kāenga - Learning @ Home' mahi Pānui & Tuhituhi to your blog

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    1. Kia ora Koka
      Will do.
      Nga mihi
      Ava

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  3. Kia ora Ava,
    I like that you have shared your writing on your blog. I can see you have been busy writing. I look forward to seeing some more learning on your blog. Do you have a chromebook at home so you can do your learning digitally? I would love to see some writing with images.
    Mrs Krausse

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    1. Kia Ora Koka Maria
      Yes I do have my own Chromebook at my house so I can keep up with my learning at school.

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