Ngā mihi nunui ki a koe, māhau e kaha ana te mahi i te kāenga. Many greetings to you, you have worked well on your mahi at home.
Ngā āhuatanga e rata ana ki awau; 1. Āu pātai i waihanga e koe, e ngana koe te whakamahi i ngā kauhau e whakamahi ana e mātau i te akomanga i te wehenga tuatahi o tēnei tau 2. I whakamahi koe i ngā mahi pakirehua, ki tāku e kite ana, ngā mihi, i te mea, i mahi mātau i tēnei i te akomanga
The things I enjoyed; 1. The questions you've created, you've used what was in our lesson in class in term 1 2. From what I can see, you've worked on the inquiry mahi, Well Done, as we also worked on this in class
Māhau hei tiro anō, 1. Tāpirihia te tohu pātai kei te mutunga o tāu rerenga pātai 2. Aro ki ngā mahi kei te ripa Ako i te Kāenga kei tō mātau akomanga paetukutuku 3. Tāpirihia tonu, āu mahi pānui me te tuhituhi mai i te ripa Ako i te Kāenga ki tāu rangitaki
Things for you to look again at; 1. Add question marks at the end of your questions 2. On our class site, on the 'Ako i te Kāenga - Learning @ Home' tab, focus on the mahi on that tab 3. Continue to add your 'Ako i te Kāenga - Learning @ Home' mahi Pānui & Tuhituhi to your blog
Kia ora Ava, I like that you have shared your writing on your blog. I can see you have been busy writing. I look forward to seeing some more learning on your blog. Do you have a chromebook at home so you can do your learning digitally? I would love to see some writing with images. Mrs Krausse
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ReplyDeleteTēnā koe Ava,
ReplyDeleteNgā mihi nunui ki a koe, māhau e kaha ana te mahi i te kāenga.
Many greetings to you, you have worked well on your mahi at home.
Ngā āhuatanga e rata ana ki awau;
1. Āu pātai i waihanga e koe, e ngana koe te whakamahi i ngā kauhau e whakamahi ana e mātau i te akomanga i te wehenga tuatahi o tēnei tau
2. I whakamahi koe i ngā mahi pakirehua, ki tāku e kite ana, ngā mihi, i te mea, i mahi mātau i tēnei i te akomanga
The things I enjoyed;
1. The questions you've created, you've used what was in our lesson in class in term 1
2. From what I can see, you've worked on the inquiry mahi, Well Done, as we also worked on this in class
Māhau hei tiro anō,
1. Tāpirihia te tohu pātai kei te mutunga o tāu rerenga pātai
2. Aro ki ngā mahi kei te ripa Ako i te Kāenga kei tō mātau akomanga paetukutuku
3. Tāpirihia tonu, āu mahi pānui me te tuhituhi mai i te ripa Ako i te Kāenga ki tāu rangitaki
Things for you to look again at;
1. Add question marks at the end of your questions
2. On our class site, on the 'Ako i te Kāenga - Learning @ Home' tab, focus on the mahi on that tab
3. Continue to add your 'Ako i te Kāenga - Learning @ Home' mahi Pānui & Tuhituhi to your blog
Kia ora Koka
DeleteWill do.
Nga mihi
Ava
Kia ora Ava,
ReplyDeleteI like that you have shared your writing on your blog. I can see you have been busy writing. I look forward to seeing some more learning on your blog. Do you have a chromebook at home so you can do your learning digitally? I would love to see some writing with images.
Mrs Krausse
Kia Ora Koka Maria
DeleteYes I do have my own Chromebook at my house so I can keep up with my learning at school.
Great to hear.
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